WORKING TITLE: Seattle
A practice script for a road-trip series I have been thinking about for a while.
00 - Pilot
SYNOPSIS: Anton and Steph drive off into the dark together, neither quite pleased with their current situation.EXT. STEPHANIE'S APARTMENT - NIGHT
Stephanie is on the phone by her apartment window. Even shrouded in shadow we can tell she is shaking. A WINDOW CRACKED SLIGHTLY OPEN seems to STEAM as the indoor warmth leaks out.
ANTHONY (O.S.)
Do you have someone to stay with you?
STEPHANIE
Yeah. Matt is staying with me tonight.
ANTHONY (O.S.)
Matt's in Seattle this week. Dude, I'll come over, it's on my way.
Stephanie doesn't speak for a long while. Her shadow twists, then there's a spark. Flame illuminates her face for a moment. She has lit a stick of incense.
ANTHONY (O.S.)(CONT'D)
'Ey, if you need to talk, just talk, I'm listening.
STEPHANIE
Yeah, no, it's fine I just, I still feel like I just need to get away for a bit. I'll be fine,...
INTERCUT WITH:
EXT. COUNTY HIGHWAY - NIGHT
We hear Anthony and Steph keep talking off screen, Anthony almost consoling and Stephanie endlessly repeating. We follow a JEEP WAGONEER along an empty-looking highway as the vehicle pulls into a
INT./EXT. FILL'N'GO - NIGHT
gas station.
STEPHANIE (O.S.)
It's silly, I'll be fine. Things aren't that bad. Who am I crying for when there are people whose folks are dying of cancer and the world is overheating.
Anthony, mid-20s in a brand name jacket and too-nice jeans, begins to pump gas before walking
inside the building.
ANTHONY (O.S.)
Sure someone's always got it worse, that doesn't mean you don't have it bad.
He draws THREE HUNDRED IN CASH from an ATM just inside the door. At the counter he pays for the gas and puts the rest on a PREPAID VISA CARD.
He walks back out, re-enters the vehicle and we follow again as he moves across the street, parking in front of a
EXT. DOLLAR GENERAL - NIGHT
where he again exits the vehicle.
INT. DOLLAR GENERAL FROM OUTSIDE - NIGHT
We approach, again at eye-level as he ranges the aisles and by the time he approaches the cash register we are almost breathing on the store window.
He pours several items onto the counter:
- a USED/NEW VIDEO GAME,
- TWO BLU-RAY MOVIES,
- and an assortment of SNACKS,
TRAIL MIX, and
CHEESE.
From a display next to the register he grabs one other item; a cassette-to-1.5mm-audio ADAPTER goes on the card before he walks out the door.
INT. JEEP WAGONEER - NIGHT
Anthony sits behind he wheel of his Jeep, talking into the phone.
EXT. STEPHANIE'S APARTMENT - NIGHT
The incense smoke wafts up it like a reverse waterfall, mixing with the air at the top where the window is just open.
Inside,
INT. STEPHANIE'S APARTMENT - NIGHT
a gym bag sits unzipped on a large bed, several jackets hang on a wall, and a small pile of dress shoes and heels is piled outside a closet that obviously hasn't been opened in a while.
Despite the unkempt look, the room is sparsely furnished and even less decorated. Candles, incense, rent envelopes and a few phone cords poke out of corners and cover what counterspace exists.
INT. ANTHONY'S JEEP WAGONEER - NIGHT
Anthony drives with a headphone in one ear, he is on the phone. His lips line up with the voice on the phone.
The phone clicks off as the vehicle pulls up outside
EXT. STEPHANIE'S APARTMENT - NIGHT
When he arrives there are no words. She is standing outside her apartment, a LIT CIGARETTE in an unsteady hand. She flicks it – a nervous tic – the ashless tip leaving a trail of light.
ANTHONY
Do you have a preference? or shall I choose a direction?
A flash of recognition and an inscrutable look (gratitude?) flashes across her face; then it is gone again – her BROWN EYES dark as the night sky is blue.
INT. ANTHONY'S JEEP WAGONEER - NIGHT
CLOSE ON:
She has been crying, but now sits looking out the
window of the Jeep Wagoneer. The night's NEAR
FREEZING CHILL had made every SHAKY BREATH
painfully visible. But now, as the HEATER warms
her skin and her soul, she breathes more deeply
and fewer tears fall. She shakes less.
EXT. JEEP WAGONEER - SUNRISE
South he drives, then West, and Little Rock is
nearing as the sun comes up.
INT. JEEP WAGONEER/ROAD - DAY
She is asleep for most of the drive, though her
mind is alert and her eyes sometimes open.
INT. JEEP WAGONEER/GROCERY - DAY
Once, the car stops and he returns with two
GROCERY SACKS of food.
INT. JEEP WAGONEER/ROADSIDE - MIDDAY
At a second stop, he moves it to the trunk, and pulls out a SMALL PILE OF BOOKS and A BLANKET from the trunk. A bag of clothes in her size, some her own, is on the floor in the back seat.
INT. JEEP WAGONEER/UNDER A BRIDGE - EVENING
She wakes up at the third stop. Half-way to Dallas, on the side of the highway, nothing in sight save a cluster of BARNS and the evening sun.
He is asleep, curled in a ball, in the back seat. His JACKET covers one arm and his chest. She touches his EXPOSED arm and hand, he is cold. She places her own blanket over him tucking the frigid limb well beneath the comforter.
A POST-IT NOTE taped to the dash reads "FOLLOW SIGNS FOR OKLAHOMA CITY". Taking the driver's seat she takes a deep breath.
INSERT: She pushes the CASSETTE into the TAPE DECK.
Courtney Barnett's "Avant Gardener" begins to play as the vehicle hums to life.
CUT TO BLACK
CREDITS ROLL.